Not your typical idol story, i like how character was set and the story progressing. Keep up the good work Author!👍🏻🎉 (looking forward onto how his soul goes to mc)
The story line seems okay, it's really hard to read due to the numerous grammar mistakes but those can be solved easily. I was confused at the flashback as I did not really know what was happening. Also, it would be nice to have a clear example of the currency, what are moon coins in pounds or yen?Apart from that, it seems to be thought out and there is clearly effort put in here, good job!
Woah! This book has huge potential! This is a totally new trope! Very few grammar mistakes. An enjoyable read. I definitely recommend this book!You are a very good writer! keep making more chapter! looking forward to it!
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Just as Lucas was going to turn around, he saw astonishment and delight in the eyes of both of the unknown men. Their widened eyes was filled with surprise and excitement.
"I have killed countless people, I have devoured their souls, destroying them completely, I protected what I believed important and destroyed those that were imposed on my path, I have walked with an unbreakable will, nothing has to move my spirit."
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