Crimson Eyes: Chosen By The Succubus Queen

kelima mahluk itu segera berkumpul tiba-tiba muncul 4 tentakel kecil dari punggung kera yang ada di paling belakang ke empat tentakel itu menusuk 4 kera yang ada didepannya hanya dalam hitungan detik keempat kera lainnya lenyap seolah-olah diserap oleh satu kera yang tersisa asap merah keluar dari seluruh tubuh kera itu tiba-tiba darah dipunggung kera itu membalutnya sampai berbentuk seperti sebuah bola, bola itu mengeras dan akhirnya retak seperti telur yang akan menetas tak lama kemudian muncul sosok baru dengan bulu emas tanpa topeng tinggi 2 meter dan tubuh yang terlihat seperti seorang olahragawan hewan itu membuka matanya terlihat iris mata dengan warna merah darah.

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This novel is awesome, I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work..It has a very good writing quality. I love the way you added elements from Bleach.

Loved it, there were a few typos but nothing that really broke the story or its emotions that it invokes.Lots of moments where i was genuinely immersed in the story. Good characters, good story, the world itself could be more fleshed out but other than that it is amazing.Would have left a review sooner but WebNovel kept glitching out and wouldn't let me submit one. However that won't stop me. :)

I love everything about this book—the cover, the synopsis, the chapters, and the characters. If somebody is conflicted about whether to read it or not, just remember, it's a hit or a miss.And author san, looking forward to character development, mountain of chapters  and... u know what I mean, ahem