"Aku Ingin bereinkarnasi di dunia Highschool DXD dan kalau bisa tolong buat aku terlahir sebagai saudara kembar issei" kataku dengan gembira kepada ibu alam.
-Ding. Responding to host the weapons factory and a physical function system after choosing the location and through the provision of resources all types of weapons and vehicles can be built from the host grade the weapons and vehicles available can not overcome in two host level
When I read the first chapter , I wanted to read the rest.I could see the different behavior in the characters. I really enjoyed reading.Except for the minor issues, your story is by far the best.
Great read so far with very few mistakes grammar wise. World building could be expanded on but it is slowly being fleshed out. MC is kinda generic personality wise but the whole not logging out with everyone else is unique but brings about its own problems. I’m still wondering how he is paying his bills this whole time. Magic sword man is also kinda generic. Wish figh scenes were fleshed out more like in the beginning. Keep it up
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