Creating an Industrial Empire in 19th Century Parallel World

  • Genre: History
  • Author: SorryImJustDiamond
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. HellChaosNetherPx4
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    5 months ni update :(
  1. KhyaaLhLl
    KhyaaLhLl rated it
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    It is a grounded and somewhat realistic version of "technology system in modern world" Or a very boring version of "tyrany of steel"
  1. CS9
    CS9 rated it
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    It's truly disappointing to see this novel that has so much potential and very interesting to be continued to die off and hasn't been update for an entire year already and I don't know how long we can hold on and maintain hope
  1. Gale Monroe
    Gale Monroe rated it
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    Novel is quite bland. It is rarely enjoyable.

    The primary concern is that the writing quality is quite low. Author constantly pads the word count with completely nonsensical and useless information which has no impact on the story, coupled with repetition. You can have entire chapters that are nothing but fillers. I will give the most "on-the-nose" example (I just copy-pasted, this is really how it was written in the novel):

    "Well, my partner has performed some calculations, and he has determined that we will require ten million dollars to mass-produce this rifle. Will the government be willing to add three million dollars?" Poul inquired.

    Sherman paused for a moment, carefully considering the offer. "If we provide you with ten million dollars, you will be able to mass-produce this rifle. Is that correct?"

    "Yes," Poul replied "we will need ten million dollars to mass-produce this rifle. Is the government willing to add three million dollars?" Poul asked.

    Sherman was silent for a moment, pondering the offer. "If we give you ten million dollars, you will be able to mass-produce that rifle. Is that what you are saying?"
  1. Roffy123
    Roffy123 rated it
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    8th month with no updates.
    Anyone knows the authors social or tell me why this is (maybe) on haitus/dropped??
    I really want to know, thanks!
  1. g0lem
    g0lem rated it
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    This novel is either one of the best or one of the worst on the site, there can't be an entry 2 with this kind of story.
    It's time to see if I've discovered a hidden gem or I'll be wasting my time.
  1. sleepingpeacefully
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    4 months...  No update...
  1. nadaxzq
    nadaxzq rated it
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    Is this novel gd ? I'm thinking of trying it
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