Cracked Foundations

Thanks for the chapter

Bro story,plot,world building everything is good but it's too slow peace becuse of that it's sometime feel boring like chapter 171-177 has description which if you wish you can wright it 2 chapter but you waste 8 chapter free pass

hmm. quite plain. fm is too plain tho. hopefully it gets better over time

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This story has an interesting premise and I really enjoy the current development of the story

I'll be the poison tester here 🤧I've read up to four chapters and its's good so far other than the three poems in chapter one, I've not encountered anything major that tipped me off.So yeah next time cut back on the poems and you'll get a five stars next time (Author don't delete them entirely though, I liked some of them.)I'll give a summary/synopsis of the first few chapters as well for fellow readers who are hesitating.Man with dog gets reincarnated into a fantasy world in the medievalish era.Story is currently still full of mystery and wonder for the magic system, but author has given clues here and there.                                                             Peace out                                                          ~kindred scholar

Damn man u cliffhanger but all is well I like it. Minor tweaking and you are good to go.