What makes this story different than the other Hollywood stories is that this feels more like a slice of life. It goes into more detail about the process of creating a movie and its obvious the author has done their research. After reading up to chapter 60 it also seems like there's probably no harem and the story just seems way more realistic.
First of all excuse me if there are mistakes english is not my native language. What I can say about this story is that for now it is well written, the characters and the plot is well constructed. The fights are well described without being too surrealist so I like that. For finished I hope that the author continues like that both for the frequency of these updates and for the quality of its plot.
Do you remember those moments in between classes or after school with your friends?A serial series of a bunch of friends just being boys. It's episodic and more than a little random. The grammar and writing style isn't the best, not at all. But it's fun and gives you a bit of nostalgia for your own wacky youth. Fantasy, romance, adventure and such novels are more popular on this site but we shouldn't dismiss these sorts of silly relaxing things. Thank you for all the little smiles author.
Since there is only one chapter, this review could mean nothing and should be taken with a grain of salt as I too, am just an a m a t e u r writer.First off, I don't understand who is narrating and what person (2/nd and 3/rd) the story is being told in. The starting paragraph doesn't really captivate the reader too much, and it shows a lack of effort put into it. (What I'm saying is — it sounds like the story is beginning with someone just telling the story at a dinner table or something. Grammar is alright and nothing that's unreadable or anything, so that's nice. I however, can't get a picture in my head of what I'm witnessing here. There are no descriptions of anyone basically, and no real location I can imagine. Yes, he was in a bar, but where is he now? The street? The bar? The bathroom? I don't know. This is a comedy, as clearly labeled by the author. And there is a lot of cussing. So if you like curse words and immaturity this might be a very well read for you. (Not my cup of tea personally) I'm also not very used to seeing names followed by a ":" and then they talk. It makes the dialogue bland and lacks emphasis. The story has potential if it's consistent and appeals to a certain audience other than myself. Once again, I personally don't read Harem/Comedy/System, so this review can mean nothing to you. It's just some of my thoughts with an unbiased rating. Keep writing and improving! Cuz that's what writing is about!
Overall just a good novel. Noice job Sevyn. I am waiting for more chapters! Okay it says I have to have more characters so hhgfdhhngdgshjxbxjsgsbzjshgsgsgsghsbbs
Interesting read with a clear premise based on an alternate world. The MC is over powered but limited by both circumstances and environment. Though the characters are not overly well developed, they still draw attention and not completely clichéd. The storyline and plot is entertaining and writing is well paced. If you like a well balanced novel, this one is a good read.
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