I've only read a few chapters. With that in mind, here's my impression. I appreciate the fact how the narrator just jumps straight into the action without any drama, narrating from a third person's perspective, and then slowly switches and dials it down so that the reader can keep up with the world. It does pique your curiosity, and I'm going to keep an eye out for more.
it reminds me of the same story line in another book on a website, It's frustrating to see the same thing twice. what a copy cat. write your own story author it is not worth writing if you copy the story.
A potentially good storyline with awesome character designππππππππππππππππππππππππI gave it five star to encourage author but still it's got a way to become a genuinely five star rating novel π§Keep up the good work author πππππππππππππππππππ
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