What a cool 😎 and heartwarming 😍 start! I gotta say I am impressed with the grammar! No obvious mistakes, kudos! Now for the story quality, I am impressed also! Nice and engaging plot! Good luck with your future and I hope to see it ob December! This could be an anime or movie if chosen!
Pros:+ Characters are unique and interesting and the dialogue is witty as hell+ Pacing is pretty well done, author doesn’t drag things on too much+ Story is very original and the author does his best to steer away from clichesCons:- Grammar and spelling are a bit off sometimes but not so bad to be unreadable, easily fixable with an editor- Slow release schedule, I NEED MORE- Chapters feel a bit short but maybe I’m a quick a reader? - Not many POVs explored to expand on world buildingConclusion:It’s a very nice read, can be mildly frustrating with some of the author’s grammar mistakes, especially if you’re a native english reader like me, but the author does correct his mistakes if you comment so it’s a good sign that he listens to feedback. As someone who has read A LOT of web novels, this ranks very high in my list of enjoyable reads since it is original and takes a unique take on the typical cultivation story. I hope this helps and have a wonderful day fellow reader! :)Sincerely,RobespierreK
Don't mind me just putting some quotes from my favorite game bloodborne:"Ahh, Kos, or some say Kosm... Do you hear our prayers?""No, we shall not abandon the dream.""No one can catch us! No one can stop us now! [cackling].""Ah hah hah ha! Ooh! Majestic! A hunter is a hunter, even in a dream. But, alas, not too fast! The nightmare swirls and churns unending!""As you once did for the vacuous Rom, grant us eyes, grant us eyes. Plant eyes on our brains, to cleanse our beastly idiocy.""The grand lake of mud, hidden now, from sight.""The cosmos, of course!""Let us sit about, and speak feverishly. Chatting into the wee hours of...""New ideas, of the higher plane!""Now I'm waking up, I'll forget everything..."
Character development, the world it's based in, the plot.... everything's peak...I'm hooked ngl.Thanks to my girlfriend for recommending this one, and thanks to the author for an incredible experience, looking forward to more.
After James finishing his stories, Bayan can see that Jones expression is still the same as ever and only told James to scout the goblin camp, and he will prepare some villager to fight against the goblin. James make Bayan to lead the way into the place where he met the goblin, Bayan is still remembered the place and he lead James and Matthew there.
(Walang nagawa si xenon kundi ang sumunod na lamang,ngunit hindi pa rin maalis sa kanyang isip na sana at makilala niya ang kanyang mga magulang lalo na ang kanyang kakambal) . . . . .
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