So I have been reading the raw novel and around chapter 350 or so it seems to change to a different novel with similar aspects? Also the system seems to disappear for long periods of time. It’s a very confusing story as it progresses as it seems like the author forgets a lot of things that previously happened and regresses the story.
Mc is dumb af amd i cant stand it sooooo here is my review dbejdhgeueudwhueejsjsjejjeudieu3 heHD idueggc8tcr6d7rdrd7rxtd7tf8tf85ugggututututuufutggufugug
TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHH ITS A COPY WRITE AND ITS HOT DOO DOO WATER I LOVE BEN TEN BUT WHAT THSI PEROSN DID OS JUST NOOOOO...sorry for yelling but this is a no for me chief
Good Job....Nice storyline...Update more frequently author...----Also a quick suggestion:in your inkstone page, you could actually set up a new cover page for your book
Once I put on deodorant, I walked out of the room and downstairs. On the way down I could smell waffles, bacon, eggs, and sausage. My stomach rumbled at the delicious smells. When I entered the kitchen I literally barked a laugh. Tei was in a Strawberry Shortcake apron cooking the bacon.
"I'VE GOT SHIVERS DOWN MY SPINE TO LISTENERS! ALRIGHT EXAMINEES, LEMME GIVE YOU THE LOW DOWN, ON HOW THIS'LL GO DOWN! ARE YA' READY!?" ... silence once again...
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