Condemned to Death (High Fantasy/ Anti-Hero)

Ever chapter I read is amazing. Keep up the good work. The story keeps on getting better and better. I am surprised about the portal and the power it contain to sent Omar burned up

This novel is yet again another example of a novel with a story which could be developed and made into something interesting maybe even "slightly" different from the rest, however the cliche and culture that runs in these types of novels has ruined it. Our MC has spent 6 years IRL which is 12 years in game yet proceeds to get surprised by a level 5 enemy using a basic skill... He claims he killed an ancient dragon yet he can't kill a level 5 enemy with 0 brain cells. Continuing onward this novels MC has to be one of the most retarded ones ever, we all know that in most novels where MC has reincarnated or transmigrated with experience and future knowledge that they end up being dense but this novel takes it to a whole new level. 80% of the novel is the MC just repeating things such as "6 years of experience" or how the MC's sister will get ill and how nice she is, The author expects us to feel attached or to feel at all for the characters yet shoving this **** in our face is not the way to do it, you have the weave the emotions in not just state how we should feel. The novel's world background is also atrocious, at least in sense to the game as many things which even 10 year old kids would find common sense happened to be things that took people "2 years to realize and caused a big commotion"... that's basically saying that although we are nearly 100 years into the future with all this advanced technology (of which the understanding of should indicate the human race becoming more intelligent) that people can't think that maybe just maybe you can also be the evil guy in a quest like wtf. Also i understand that in novels somethings have to made so that the MC coincidentally finds this or in this case that he just happens to be lucky in his drops, however that needs to be in a more subtle way and in which the MC still faces challenges, i mean the predictability of this novel is just absurd an example is when he gets a belt with +15 HP and just so happens to need it to survive against the next guard he attacks or how after gaining the full set (which was also coincidentally gained after remembering some fucking genius gurus advice that there's two sides to every story and that you can be the evil guy) he has enough reputation to make the priest turn his back... The rest of the novel is just people exclaiming how MC must be some Rich 1st tester and how they are mysterious and shouldn't be offended (typical CN bull****) and "subtle" face-slapping. Overall the MC of this novel doesn't even begin to act like a veteran who was once one of the top 10 swordsmen should act, the flow of the story is just is stupid it's almost as if somebody was just thinking and writing no planning before hand and no editing as none of the names which should be capitalized are capitalized, about 50+ chapters are just wasted in the game and the real life world is only touched at the end with more  BS in your face telling you how you should feel, after about 35 chapters i skim read most of it considering how everything was jut a useless info dump and repetition. I cannot begin to comprehend how people are rating novels like these with 5 stars and how always these kind of novels get selected through trial read and novels which are actually good and have a fresh perspective in webnovel like "Plague Doctor" actually get dropped.

Apparently, the reason this book wasn't selected was because there wasn't enough fans who spent coins on this book, so they discarded this book. The really disgusting and sad part about all this is that they probably don't even plan on translating this book, but at the same time won't let anyone else translate this book either.  That's webnovel for you.

I didnt read much, there where too many things not adding up in the story. wierd how it has soo many 4+ star raitings. From what is written seems to be his stats start out at those of healthy adult yet he takes 3 hours to run 5 miles, average walking speed is 3mph and that is taking into account unhealthy people. Stats are wrong every other chapter. Then when he is barley stronger than the average he procceds to beat up 3 people who have atleast some figthing experience since they are bullies, while im assuming he has 0 since author wrote he either runs away or escapes from then

I love how it turned out in the first chapter, the writing quality was good and the world background was superb, I really like it. I want to know more just by reading the other chapters. There is a potential for this to become popular, nice work fellow author!

Oops, almost forgot the tradition of Webnovel, my bad. Here's what I have been planning when I began writing this book.Writing style: Well, I am trying my best to present the story in simple English while also providing decent immersion.Characters: This is one part of the story I can say with my chest puffed up, they are realistic. Most of my efforts went into designing characters that are life-like.World Background: This is set on Earth involving its numerous complexities. I assure you that any magical phenomenon set in the story will have a solid logic. Grammar: Well, my language is almost perfect. Though it may not be on the level of standard publications since I barely spend about an hour of editing per chapter.Updates: Well, this is something for the future. I am currently uploading 3 chapters per day, but don't know how long I could keep this up. Maybe if I go full-time writing, this would be easy. Let's leave it for the future.Conclusion: Have a read and see for yourself. I haven't used any cliche till now, so hehe. Expect a good reading time

MP – 1,125/1,125

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