
Commanding Wind and Cloud
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Author:
Skyscrapers
- Status: Ongoing
Rating(3.5 / 5.0, 21 votes)
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The dialogue and thoughts shouldn't both be in " " , Every-time i read something in " " i assume they are speaking only to see -thought XX. Sometimes it seems like they are thinking, but it turns out he is speaking. It's like a goddamn guessing game every-time you see " " you can't be sure if they are speaking or thinking, so you have to read the whole line, read after it to know if those are thoughts or words and ONLY then you can insert it into the story. So many times i get it wrong. Really the worst thing about this novel is that, at this point im just tired of the guessing game.
I eat rainbows and sometimes they taste like water , but the real good stuff taste like skittles. I go around eating rainbows so I can tell you which ones are skittles and the ones that are the tasteless water vapor that they are . And this novel tastes like skittles my friends. Good character building ?( yes) Strong willed character that actually needs to put effort to improve ?( yes) good interaction with side characters and a tinge of romance? ( yes). Good world building that is not info dumped in paragraphs and is slowly shown to the reader?( yes). That there is already 5-6 different flavor folks. If you don’t like the orange skittles there’s always the red one . In other words taste the rainbow folks, aka good read.
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