Any novel similar to top-tier providence deserves a thumbs up to me. The mc is probably not as much of an extremist as Han Jue, as he finds it ok for disciples to go down the mountain to the outside world if need be. This is unlike Han Jue who basically tells his disciples whose clan is about to be killed to stay put and not go out.The pace isn't too bad, it's more on the faster side, mostly because the mc is getting a bit too pampered by the system by gaining all the knowledge regarding arrays, a cauldron that can refine any pill with the highest quality without fail, and spring water that can accelerate growth of spiritual plants by a hundred years. Well it's not like I find it bad or anything.The characters are a-ok, the mc does stick to his values and his disciples feel much more naturally placed than last week's trial read that also makes use of a "taking in disciples system". It's because the 2nd disciple doesn't just instantly beat the 1st disciple mc got because of a different in quality, so it doesn't feel like the past disciples will be expendable and left behind.World background is alright, can't really comment about it on a 20chapter novel really
Its good but probably will not get selected i dont know whats those fans like about in other books whatever this novel got me i recommend everyone to read it
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tiene buena trama y fondo el desarrollo de los personajes es muy bueno el desarrollo de la trama y el personaje no se ciente forsado es muy suave también las personalidades de los personajes están bien expresados y tiene un poco de misterio y tragedia es muy bueno espero los capítulos
I was already hooked after reading the synopsis, and the first chapter was really really good! Keep it up author, and keeo updating it! I'll continue to read this story because it's really very good!!!
Ok, for writing quality i give 3 stars because initially the story was a bit rushed and the fact that the main character is able to fight with Rank A beast basically from the start of the story (around 17-30 ch but the story progress slowly so its basically the beginning). Then another fact is that there is a certain battle that lasted more than 10 chapters with the POV of other characters and at a certain point it became just boring, it was too damn long even if i understand what the author tryed to do which was trying to give the POV of the MC which observed the battlefiled from many "angles
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