This novel started out great, but the author purposefully sabotaged it with overused and frustratingly annoying cliches. I won’t say how exactly because I don’t like to spoil, but at around chapter 100, the author introduced a plot that essentially made all of the character development that came before it useless. That’s over 100 chapters of tedious character development that went down the drain. What a waste of time, unless you’re a masochist who likes being trolled
as of chapter 12 I can say that the characters feel incredibly vivid and realistic, the dialogue doesn't feel awkward and the world building is certainly there with purpose. however the grammar is utterly awful, author does take steps to fix it, however I feel he/she over-relies on the readers to point it out(I fear that when I get to the locked chapters, it's just gonna be a literary mess). when it does get to locked chapters I guarantee a lot of people will pull out, cuz the chapters are like a swipe long and continues to be until like ch 80, author did say that he Increases the word count later, but he did it far too late. could be one of the greats if only it had:1. better grammar2.longer chapters
This cover is pulling me in right now, I really like it and I like the story line about a harsh beginning and a new struggle to become better can't wait to read this one for sure!
First of all, the cover is awesome. For the story it's equally great. I hope for Allaine to rise soon and support others like him. Maybe a gang would be fine also. An interesting story.
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I didn't read the story yet . I'm wondering what +18 mean!! Like describing a s*x scene or is for gore?? Because if it is gore i will be interested in reading it otherwise not my type
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