Chronicles of the Ancient Star

  • Genre: Fantasy
  • Author: JohnJabien
  • Status: Ongoing

Rating(3.4 / 5.0, 12 votes)
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  1. senu19
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    I don’t usually write reviews but when I do it is because the novel is AMAZING!!! Now things that I love about your story:- The protagonists is a HARDWORKER I.e. meaning just because he has a system he does not slack off.- The protagonist is REASONABLY I.e. he is not a hot head and does things that actually make sense. The risks he takes makes sense.- The system is a GUIDE/SUPPORT not a Cheat code meaning that the protagonist does not automatically win all the time. The protagonist keeps growing as a person and learning.- the storyline is not repetitive and keeps you on your toes with unexpected outcomes.- And I love that this is NOT a Harem and that the protagonist is focused on his careers. I actually love that he is not romantically involved with anyone at this moment.  P.s. the last thing I loved the AGNAS ark if author can tell me who was your inspiration I would be eterna gratefull.Overall THANK YOU author please continue working your magic and I pray you stay healthy, constant and you give a satisfying ending to this BRILLIANT story.
  1. TheLocalGuyT2P
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    This story seems like the best one I've seen in quite awhile. Reincarnation, systems, and detectives. What could possibly be added to make a story like this better? Flawless.
  1. Thetickingtime
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    No es por ser mala onda pero tu historia está más seca que el corazón de una mujer no muestras como se relacionan los personajes simplemente haces un pov y listo enamorada para toda la vida las interacciones tampoco me atrapan y la lectura no me atrae simplemente se interrumpe la imaginación qué creas en la cabeza para ser cincero le falta mucho pero esto no es para desanimarte es para que crezcas y puedas ser un mejor autor
  1. Drunkenturtlefist
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    It doesnt have a good plot and is way too rushed. At first the concept seemed interesting and had some potential but it became unrealistic in a way.
  1. PilinyTheYoungerBIP
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    This is a cringe worthy novel the author has out done himself.                                                                                                                                                                         Why most of the VR novels are so bad? It's like I dont't even know....
  1. Samm212
    Samm212 rated it
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    A very good Novel, I love how the concept of cultivation was introduced, definitely going to keep reading, good work author!!
  1. ReadingDeity
    ReadingDeity rated it
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    "What yOu lookIng at pussy" I grin, it growls
  1. SonicVinilf
    SonicVinilf rated it
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