CHAOS HUNTER: Soul Bound

I really like this new story. It has the cultivation end of things which I like but it also has a mix of a mage feeling to it.  It has a good mysterious plot happening which I really like and it has the face slapping without being as vicious as a lot of cultivation novels are at this point.  Not that I don't like all the good fight scenes in my novels but it is a nice change from the status quo. I also really like the school idea in this book.  It is different from the sects that you usually read about.

I have long been looking for a book that would go in this direction, so I excited to continue reading it, as the first few chapters so far have trapped me in them, making me want to continue reading. Good job author!

so in summary,grammar= 1/5everything else= 5/5The story is wonderful, the characters have depth.the grammar is a godless afront to mother nature

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It would be a great story if there are more chapters. Until now it is a goog and unique beginning and setting and has the potential to be interesting for a long time.

Hi author. Your  story plot is amazing and intriguing. The readers who like to read system novels, this is totally for them . I could not find any grammar mistakes. As for the world background it is also nice. As its just the start  all the best and keep writing

[Jun: But, will that be enough?]

'It would have to be a Logia after all.' Lin Xu nodded to himself.