This is a re-review and one with some honesty.
First of all the story turned into something else than I intended, and it was actually worse in some parts than my first. I made the mc edgy for the sake of him being edgy.
Elior is almost a character without flaws but I made him somewhat a hypocrite intentionally.
The worldbuilding was dull, and honestly, I have saved up a few things for later parts. which turned out to be a bad decision.
The writing quality is poor, and you will expect a lot of typos. If you don't fear it then feel free to continue.
As for the story development and plot, it is above average with a few nice fight scenes, here and there. and the main idea of the book is pretty good.
Like my other book, this one got its voice in the chapter 70s. Honestly, I still think the book is better than many on this site with all those flaws. Continue if you like and leave behind comments.
Didnt even read the story because the story sounds stupid. He goes back in time to fix his misstakes yet he cant remember anything? How is he gonna fix anything.
Just start the novel with him at the acamedy no need for him to go back in the past.
Cant say if this novel is good or bad. Maybe the synopsis is just misleading and the author meant something else?
I really like where this is going and can’t wait to see how the characters develop im personally into a little more descriptive and i guess you can word it in a nice way when it comes to The action But even despite that this is already one of my favorite reads
really love this novel.................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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First of all the story turned into something else than I intended, and it was actually worse in some parts than my first. I made the mc edgy for the sake of him being edgy.
Elior is almost a character without flaws but I made him somewhat a hypocrite intentionally.
The worldbuilding was dull, and honestly, I have saved up a few things for later parts. which turned out to be a bad decision.
The writing quality is poor, and you will expect a lot of typos. If you don't fear it then feel free to continue.
As for the story development and plot, it is above average with a few nice fight scenes, here and there. and the main idea of the book is pretty good.
Like my other book, this one got its voice in the chapter 70s. Honestly, I still think the book is better than many on this site with all those flaws. Continue if you like and leave behind comments.
Just start the novel with him at the acamedy no need for him to go back in the past.
Cant say if this novel is good or bad. Maybe the synopsis is just misleading and the author meant something else?
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