Chaos Cycle: The Eye of Genesis

This story requieres...patience

As long as you're fine dealing with a naive and heroic Mc for 10's of chapters

As well as fine with side character's acting more like the protagonist than the mc himself

Including a bit of gruelling frustration at the main characters action all for the sake of 'proper development '

Then go ahead. This book is defenitly for you

I started to read this novel because the title was very interesting. After I started to read it I thought that is very good, but sadly, It doesn't get updated to often

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Very good story I liked everything except the tournament good luck author and again sorry

I shall make this rated.....................................................................................................................

SUGGESTION: READ THE REVIEWS BEFORE READING THE STORY SO AS NOT TO SPREAD TOO MUCH HATE AND INSULTS ON THE BOOK AND MC LATER( LIKE I DID).


those are the comments i wrote hope they ll make u understand a bit about the mc mentality:

"...aizz i just need to know if he ll change his stupid belief or find a compromise because as he is now he s just AN idiot.
not saying he should go around killing women but to not even touch them while brutally handling men(like literally almost causes two men to force each other)...that s ridicoulous and make him much more of a shut in edgelord that takes women as something sacred(mega simp) than he would have been behaving normally"

"...i ve seen ur review now
moral compass is absolutely flawed as his thought process is not normal as u commented.
for the typos and ecc u barely notice them as i focus more on the story than the grammar itself .
still while it presents an interesting(?) new  approach to some, for many others the story just gets  impossible to immerse in  as i said before his thought process is not something many can immerse in unless u a shut in, that idolizes women with anime girl pillows and figurines."

if u still want to read it? good for u.
if not? glad i saved some of ur time.

overall the story is very well rounded, but I feel that a couple changes could make all the difference. What I feel are those changes are 1. the fight scenes should be longer ( not more descriptive, as in more back and forth) and 2. you should add pov's to other characters ( your choice on how long)

It's an interesting story as far as I went, but I can't continue reading it, the grammar and syntax are killing me. It takes all the joy away from me and ruins the immersion in it. It's like I can understand the story while at the same time can't and it ticks me off.
If author gets a proof reader or improves later on, I will come back, probably..