Finally... A gold... The development of the plot is good enough and kinda reasonable at least... The characters progression is Great.. it also suit my taste.. yeah solid 4.5 from me..
poor Owen I wish him luck on he's adventure to becoming the protector of love as the person who has the anti ntr system does he get a girlfriend in future chaps?
The MC can't decide. Does he want to be indifferent and mind his own business, or does he do want to involve himself in situations were he might die. The story feels so damn forced. The Mc doesn't seem to consider the consequences of his actions and lies. The conflicts are especially forced in this one since the MC seems to try his very best to avoid trouble. Don't worry though, the author can use something as convient as 'karma' to explain away all these plot holes.But this is a gag novel so I really don't know what I expected.
I rarely write reviews but I've fallen in love with this story! It combines great storytelling with a unique concept whilst being just OP enough to be reasonable.One of the best books on here imo
i just finished and this was the best book i ever read never stop writing my dude you have an Incredible gift if this ever comes out in printing i will buy it in a heart beat. Even tho i pirated the book i suggest anyone who reads this book to donate directly to the author thank you my dude while im broke hopefully you arent stay writing my dude peace
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