I could only read up to chapter 6. The author did Netorare without warning. The girl has no reason to even do this. LOL...........................................................................................................................
Interesting story the plot is very good, the protagonist's personality is amazing, harem I don't know if there will be a heroine or will appear later on I hope so
The starter point is very nice and I have to congratulate the author cause it's a really good novel at all, I think everyone that like cultivation must try this novel
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The story is just starting, so it’s hard to predict how the plot will go and how detailed it could be. But I’d say that the punctuation and grammar does make me confused sometimes. If you need any help, I’ll try to point out some things. Although, don’t get discouraged ! We all start from somewhere, and I think you have a very good world build, which was my weakest point when I first starting writing. So keep up the good work author !
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