Celestial Remnant: The Eternal Ascension

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an interesting novel with very authentic characters. the use of profanity is nice giving a more down to earth reaction which is unique. all though the character doesn't feel like she has much to them

I dropped this novel before and i was bored and found it again and decided to give it another try but I just couldn’t...First of all you meet someone and ask the person to join without explaining to detail what you want him to do and he just agrees and then you go ahead and give everything to him for free and he asks no questions whatsoever and just went ahead with it...Secondly you meet a girl who is older than you and she gave you her number and hit on you , ok I understand the fact that because it’s your first time you would want to go on a date with her but to ask her to marry you on your first date when you are only 17 WTF who does that and there are far more beautiful girls out there and also you no nothing about this girl...This novel just seems like it’s the authors wet dream and how he wants his life to be so he just write everything down without thinking that it wouldn’t be him reading the novel and also you put the restricted pa but all i see is a na*ve kind hearted boy who is an id*ot....

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This had some potential but it feels like you wrote yourself into a corner at the very beginning with the MC being given an incredibly powerful ability. Which leads to you having the MC overlook obvious ways of getting stronger simply so something in the immediate future remains a threat.  It also doesn't help that you make the MC incredibly inconsistent in terms of goals and personality.  For example, in the beginning the MC is new to the world, possesses a skeleton and enters the nearest town with the goal of remaining low profile and learning about this new world and its dangers, as in who and what to be wary of. He finds a book store, buys all the relevant literature and decides its no long an immediate concern to read them and goes for a stroll... in a body,  he already noted attracted attention due to the chilling feel it gave to those nearby. He happens upon an auction, the items of which are mostly sold to a man who is clearly rich and powerful in status as he not only bids high but no one dares bid higher and chance offending him. That is until the last 'item' a slave. Now, it should be mentioned that before the MC even entered this town he came across a bandit camp with slaves, as can be imagined horrible things were done to the slaves and he killed all the bandits as well as mercy killed one of the slaves who endured too much. As for rest despite his anger (which he shouldn't be feeling as X sealed it) he doesn't help them, he just leaves. Back to the auction, the 'item' is revealed as a beautiful demon-girl slave, he doesn't know her story, he has no reason to care for her in any way but for reasons, she gains his attention and he decides to buy her... to gather information... he then keeps doubling the bid of the rich and powerful royal until he wins for a total of 2 million gold. I feel like I should repeat that his goal before all this was to lay low and learn about the world and he keeps flip-flopping like this throughout the novel. In the end he feels less like a character and more like a plot device, he's whatever you want him to be at any given moment so you can drive the story in your desired direction, regardless of his personal history or personality.I can also get into story pacing but I think I'll stop here or this is going to get ridiculously long.

I though it was going somewhere. Nope. So fast paced you'll think that the MC has a time skip of a few weeks every chapter powering up. Nope, he went to bed and woke up. Then everyone dies, their friends die, family dies, they looked at someone else and died. But that's okay, let's smile and say thanks for the help while breaking the fourth wall when the story needs progress the story or explain an issue without actually doing either one.

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What i love most is the writers quality of writing and its style, I have binge read this book and i woke up to 10 chapters updated every 24hrs, I want to commend that and say that as much as I love this book, the author has proven to be an ink.