Celestial Master of the Dark Path

"That's right. If Souma was a classmate of the victim. The victim was twenty-four. That's an age that matches the witness' report."

And we could all use a little change

this is something where I'd only read the free chapters but nothing more, I know sometimes you get tired and don't wanna right things out fully, but still using "ur" or "u" to replace "your" or "you're" is awful, it shows a lack of interest and effort in a story. I think if you could write down your ideas and then slowly form them into one single thought. This would be good. but right now, it feels like a 6 years old just rambling on about one of their fantasy's skipping from idea to another. Also, the power scaling is horrendous. he already reached rank one at just 18 chapters in and can suddenly move at the speed of light. Make sure you edit it. Don't just post right after writing it. Actually, read your stuff out loud so you don't sound like a 6 year old.

The storyline is going  well. Recommended ❤️

It really good you should give it a try, i can say that it worth your time after reading these chapters, the story is good , and the writing style is good too.

I would have put all stars but the truth of the matter is you update slowly. This is very interesting but you don’t update frequently enough and always leave us in suspense. I just want you to work on that but either way it’s a great story.

Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?