Dropping after 40ish chapters.I just can't get into this one, was hopeful when I saw all the good reviews. Characters feel really 1 dimensional, I really cant describe anyone's personality other than MC and his grandfather. Even those two feel like cliches. Also the goat momma stuff is kinda off-putting.
I'm sorry to say this but i could read only till the chapter 3. Normally i would give it change, because i genuinely like harem genre and rarely drop a novel involves a harem route.But your novel feels like a causal conversation between 2 people due to your writing and narrative. Sometimes i can't understand what's happening due to things developing randomly and fast without having a proper explanation and building. Like he casually says he's from another word and she shouldn't say anything about it. But she just straight accepts it. No questions? No thoughts or precautions before revealing you're from another world? It seems everything is OK.
u are you in a det you are wrong about your house or your friends and the unicorns mostly in your life but they don't have a option for the last one or elders
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hello, here the author's shameless reviews.this is my first novel. so, I hope your pointer and contstructive reviews.English is not my native language, so there will be bound grammatical errors and typos. but of course, I will my best and try to improve myself as long as the story goes on.I hope you enjoy and like it.Thank you for your time.
Trash novel that’s written as the MC is a speaking to the reader and the MC is a retard. Its basically unreadable. Don’t know how it got to 400+ chapters.
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