Captured by the Yandere Space Pirates

I love your story😁 I've only read the first 4 chapters so far, and it's really nice. One suggestion I have is for you to re check the other parts, as some of them seem to be rewritten.🙃

Hiii DaoistMpCOY7, I just came across  The Pawnshop of Cursed Objects not long ago and it really caught my eye🥺!Im not a big fan of horror but i'm glad I decided to give this a try,  it's really good!  I happen to be a digital artist and If you’re ever interested in commissioning a cover or scene for your story, please feel free to reach out. I’d really loove to work with you on your characters!❤️❤️🫂