CADAR YANG MENYEMBUNYIKAN SENYUM

This is a very great story.

Love it! keep up the good work author

Review Updated: July 2nd, 2021.So yeah, only the first 20 chapters are free, but they are long in return (about 3k words on average, I'd say, double the average in most stories here), So you're getting a worth of some 40-50 chapters free. There used to be more chapters free but they were short and it seems like the author stuck them together into larger ones. I think it's good. It makes the readability smoother.It's a nice, underrated story. Not very typical for what we're used to seeing here on Webnovel, but there are lots of epic/creepy/emotional moments, and you can always learn something from its characters and their setting. This female MC is very well written (although acts a little dumb at first) but she's smart and brave overall. She starts a little weak but gets stronger as the story advances. She's interesting to follow, and some will find her relatable. So yeah, I recommend this story to everyone.(I really like how she looks on this infantile drawing. It's the author's cover :3)

A mildly (at best) entertaining novel. The translation quality is lacking at times and although this novel only has 19 chapters out atm, it's already getting more and more formulaic. Seriously, it's only been 19 chapters and I already know what pattern this entire novel is going to follow, it's just really boring faceslapping.This is sub par in both concept and execution, perhaps the squandering system was an idea that could work if done differently but this ain't it. Instead of a silly, comedic, refreshing novel, we've got a very stale take on what could have been a silly, comedic, refreshing novel, it's all just very sub par and uninteresting.I've only read 19 chapters and I'm already tired of this and I consider myself to be a patient reader. I'm glad I'm not too patient though since reading any more of this would just be a draining way to waste my time. 1/5

I saw in another review that this is a massive rip off of "Swallowed Star". I mean who would refuse for another Swallowed Star? I'm in, and I'm in big time.

I was not able to read more than 3 chapters. the grammar is very bad, you should find an editor now. you update fast but with such bad grammar it is not surprising that not many know this book.Other than that the idea is good.

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