By Crown and Claw

I've enjoyed reading it. It has a good writing style but the characters is just so annoying especially Mabel. After overall this is a good story.

Please don’t treat your characters or your readers as being ignorant, he can get a fraternity test for gods sakes!!! Stop all this ridiculousness he is this big successful business man. You portray him as country bumpkin. Stop trying to drag this on just to take our money!!!