BurningHeart

Hey great book! But I think some parts such as chapter 1 and 2 are a bit rushed i think. I think if u slowed down a bit and extended the story by explaining the emotions and monologues, it would make the story even better and worth reading. If me as a reader got an insight to the Demon child's mind it would make the story even better. It just a suggestion for the future chapters. Thanks!

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please add some more chapters I've been waiting

"Hehehe, I can soon afford a new staff, maybe I should also buy a set of robe...Hehehehe."

Three thousand years ago, there was a Ranker called the "Thorny Flower Fairy

"Alive? Yes," replied the big guy indifferently, "My brother was as me, but he died early in his life. My son showed signs of actually being able to study these laws, but these signs faded."

Before they even knew it, a few hours had passed, leaving the sky devoid of a sun. Darkness overcame the forest en masse, creating a rift in reality that separated the tangible from the ethereal. Shadows cast from the moon and stars above weaved in and out of the flowing vegetation, and the dark patterns that subsequently portrayed themselves spread around the physical matter of the forest. The moon and stars were certainly shining brightly in the sky, but nevertheless the interior of the forest was dark due to the vegetation blocking the majority of the natural light.

Can't  wait for the chapeter 2..who is "she" in the first part.. Excited!

I put my hand on one of the first few pages and activated the spell.

<p>Mina took a deep breath and tried to remember everything from the moment she arrived in the new world.</p>

The plot is not bad. But the quality of the writing, the elaboration of the characters and the interactions between them do not allow to put more than 4.

Only read the first two chapters, Some very rare an unnoticeable grammatical errors, but the author does a good job of piquing interest from the synopsis and start of chapter two.