Nice start there, being kidnapped by some tsundere and becoming a couple due to his handsome appearance. The system only has roles of improving his intelligence and fusing techniques cultivated to perfection, but the use of this function seems more redundant, and the quality of your writing is average. Everything else is acceptable for the moment.
I really wanted to like this book, love the premise but it's all over the place and borderline unreadable. A lot of it is disjointed, doesn't make sense and has issue with grammar.
Deteriorated from ch 247 onwards.Ruined the romance aspect of the novel.Too much match details, one match can take 10 chapters. It reads more like a football journal (play-by-play) analysis.
"We were caught drilling a hole into the girl's gym locker room by the Student Council Vice President, so we have to clean up all the boy's bathroom in the school and serve 15 hours of community service," Kiyota said.
"Nona muda benar ada di Kota D ini boss... Seorang mata-mata di Jepang mengatakan bila nona muda melarikan diri ke China daratan mengunakan pasport palsu. Oleh karena itu kita kehilangan jejak, karena tidak ada nama nona muda yang melakukan perjalanan meninggalkan Jepang di bagian imigrasi. Dan foto itu di dapatkan saat hari dimana nona muda keluar dari bandara.
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