Bronze Gold, Black Iron, Silver Steel

absolute s**t show of a novel. supposed elite "trained from childhood of a hidden hundred billion company" yet he's 25 making worse love choices than my 13 year old sister in middleschool. man get cheated on so many times but his "hardened on the battlefield ruthless a**" lets go of the woman every time or responds midly. every hundred chapters theres mutiple instances of him being cheated on. the worst part is he never acts ruthelessly or uses any of his supposed power really. this book could easily end in 30 chapters if anyone with half a brain was put into those situtations instead of him.

Hmm, I will add it to my library, and check it out when more chapters.                                                                                    

I like how the author executes the storyline as if you're on the water slide while you're reading this! So smooth! And that's because how the narratives are written so well that you will be directly sent inside the story itself. Yes, I mean it. As for the characters, I can tell the author put a lot of efforts into making them as realistic as they should. You can feel them as if they're beside you.What are you waiting for? Read this now!

The writing quality is great and the story flows swiftly. And the story is also very hooking. I'm not a fan of this genre, but I've enjoyed it a lot. Good luck, author. Keep it up!

Pretty sweet start I must say! The story development seems good and the characters are well made and situated. Great Job author, looking forward to reading your book more!

  I've been stuck on this book's early chapters  for a quite long time already. And  i think now is the time for us to part ways.The pros :-  The mc's backstory is unknown yet he is likeable and understandable on a certain level.-  The world is original.-  Some might like the rather slow pace .-  The mc's reaction to his reincarnation is really realistic .- A promising plot slowly unravels .- The author 's writing quality is above average( the style is not very eye-catching but it manages to keep you intrigued and  there aren't many mistakes ( if any) ).- I don't know the chapters' lenght , but i can tell it must be longer than your average 1000 words on webnovel.The cons : - The characters are  bland.The Mc  is likeable yet somehow , he is uninteresting enough. If i'm being honest , i simply don't care enough about him , even though i know him( i've read 23 chapters already).I think  this comes from two facts  :First , the Mc doesn't really have any flaw he should work on( egoism , dishonesty...).Him being insecure makes me empathize with him but that's all. I do not feel really tied to him , nor does he seems realistic , since he has no bad side.And second , the mc's personality is melancholic and cold.Contrary to what people think , writing about a cold mc  is really difficult , since it's hard to make him engaging. But not only did the author make him cold , he/she also used an omniscient pov , which further distances readers  from the Mc. If only he had funny thoughts despite having a cold demeanor, it would have still been fine.But as i said earlier , he is melancholic. So don't expect rejoicing thoughts from him.On another point , i also don't really like how the Mc acted( in the 23rd chapter ) as though Killing was forced upon him. Emir  had a choice. He could have let the hitmen go. So i don't understand  why  he lamented and acted as if it was forced upon him. If he acts in a certain way , he has to uphold his responsabilities. This all whinning time discredited him highly and it was even the final push for me to  definetely stop reading this book.All in  all , he is not irritating nor engaging. He is fine and just fine.Now for the side characters...They are forgetable( even the Mc's mother and his sister). -  The pace is slow.As i said above , the pace is rather slow. And this together with the characters makes the story feels dragging.-  I don't really like the book's general vibe .The book's ambiance is the reflection of the Mc : cold and melancholic.  It doesn’t change one bit , and this ends up making the whole reading experience underwhelming.Finally , I pray for your improvement author and hope that my honest review does help you.

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