Broken To Fixed Kiri X Reader(fem)

Only five chapters have been released right now but I'm already liking it. Adding it in my library hoping the author's not dropping the novel.

I really don't like the unlocking system you gave, it must pay 8-9 stone that's to expensive that's sucks, really sucks, fucking sucks, can you reduce the stone, in 3-5

why do I feel this novel is also going to be held on just like other novels for the sake of maintaining high energy and not updating new chapters...WN is literally becoming trash day by day

I love this novel. development of mc is very good. Though I don't like his name. most characters have western names who lives in eastern world. mc has indian name which I like. but then he chooses Japanese name. I think if you had chosen Japanese names first, which shows that his mind is stuck in the anime world, nd then chose a villainous name like ravan, or shakuni, or kans. it would have been amazing. raj is a fine name too. but orochi name just doesn't feel right. I remember reading 1 novel which also had the concept of mc using stats in cultivation world, but it failed in the story department. but this one is pretty good. it takes time and the development is realistic.I specially love the indian references. are you gujarati too like me??And I appreciate the effort you put in for the lore behind monsters. But I would like to say that you move on from the first arc soon. bcz i feel like we have spent too much time here. it is time for mc to explore. also, don't make the loli girl harem member. and if you do, then don't make it loli. she feels like a child to me. if she matures then I don't have a problem.keep up the good work. I'm supporting you with power stones. I would give at least 1 power stone to you everyday.

How could she sit down to think about a man who didn't qualify on half of her checklist? Le-anne liked how the Grand General looked at her, he was entranced by her. She liked how he consistently pursued her. She also liked how he invaded her space like he was a magnet only made for her. It exhilarated her how when she was with him, nothing was for certain.

"Ouch!" Kon yelled as he hit the ground. Ichigo ignored the complaining stuffed lion and made his way into the shop. As he opened the door he saw all the lights were on and he could hear voices coming from the sitting room. Ichigo carried his body to the back room where the voices were coming and opened the door. When he opened it he saw Renji and the guys and already arrived and they were all sitting around a table with Tessai and Kisuke drinking tea.

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