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Well above average but still too early to say anything conclusive. -Flawed but overall OK translation.-Interesting concept, plot has decent potential.-Worldbuilding is intentionally unclear, so I can't really evaluate it.-MC seems sentient but everybody else is a mob character. (So far apart from the MC there only seems to be 2 noteworthy named side characters; the general and the adjutant and even they seem to have limited use. Not much has been introduced).Overall not too well written but not too bad either. This does come across as awfully bland at times but it is nonetheless one of the stronger novels from this batch. 3/5.
A truly amazing story, hats off to the author for constructing the plot so cleverly. I was hooked by the first chapter and immediately added it to my collection. Great work author!!
I read a total of 18 chapters, the first 5 could be considered descent chaps but from chap 6 plotholes, bad translation, horrible world building and contradicting character desings.This novel is just trash overall 1/5.
Excellent fight scenes. The fight is actually what brought me in, even though there are a slight bit of writing errors, the author made sure to keep us hooked up with his story. The background of the story is simple and best.But the only thing I would say is that from the next time, make sure you give a slow start to your novel. All the best author.
I know it's my book, but I just wanted to thank Ror_happy. It keeps the hopes up. To all of you out there, please give it a go. You may be pleasently surprised. CheersAuthorDarrin.
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