I feel like there are gaps missing between each chapter I'm missing out on. I don't like how the story changes perspective from MC to another mid-chapter too often. I think there is a need for a more descriptive background for the main characters and side characters. Overall good story.
Hi guys, I’m writing between 1 and 2 chapters a day, I’m a student at university and I have a part time job on the side so I can’t do anymore. Anyway if you could drop by and leave me a review, good or bad as long as it’s constructive I’ll take it and try to become better using your advices. You can also comment on the chapters I do my best to answer every one of them.
Now that the story has ended: REVIEW UPDATE!Look, I'm a Gambit shill. I loved gambit when i first started reading it, and I loved gambit till the moment it ended.This novel, is my personal definition of 'a good time!'Really nice characters, cathartic character development, nice humour, and an author you'll love to hate (jk, inside joke). The world isn't the most detailed, and the plot doesn't require a single brain cell to comprehend, buuuut i think thats part of what makes it so fun, so carefree, and also gives you the opportunity to just fall in love with the characters.The novel is based entirely on the characters and how they'd react when thrown into different scenarios or how their relationships change with time and with events. Its like a typical found family story, but its just so fun that I love it. And it also just follows the rule of cool, and i love it. If you're looking for charming characters and a fun time, read this.If you're looking for something that'll make you wrack your brain, then well, this isn't it, but you should read it anyway.Uhhh, here stop my incoherent rambles, uhhhh bye?I'll miss this story.And "Is that so?""Is that so." is one of the most fun catchphrases ever I'll die on this hill you devilled ben
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