If you like MC turned NPC novels then this should fit your taste.The MC starts as a mountain bandit and works his way up with his system unique to him and has to kill other NPCs and players to gain strength. The progression of the novel is pretty quick and there haven't been any pitfalls yet within the first 39 chapters. Based off experience, it seems like the MC will go onto a linear path of suppressing players and continuously leveling up his faction until he becomes unrivalled. If this is your kind of novel I suggest you give it a shot.
So, how shall I put this, the story seems a bit bland due to the writing style. The story in itself is promising with a hard working transmigrated MC, and the difficulty leveling and growing in a real world fantasy. The growth progress is steady, with steady plot. There is some stereotypes but such is life.
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It's only been 30 chapters, but i can already tell the writing style, and the storytelling are the best things aside from the story itself! Its going well, keep up the excellent work!
I'm loving the mental games going on between the different characters. Kind of reminds me of Twelve Angry Men (being stuck in one room and trying to reach a consensus) and Death Parade (random people being forced to play a game with limited memories). Fun to read so far. Just a few grammatical mistakes, but it overall reads well and gets the suspense right. Introducing so many characters can be difficult, but even with just 3 chapters, I have a good feeling about each of them. Looking forward to more and figuring out who the killer is!
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