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Give this book all the love it deserves. What I really hope is that it doesn't go back to the popular theme of racism like most of the Chinese urban novels.
this book is ok short chapters, low amount of chapters any novel under 120 chapters with locked ones is automatically bad for me. Ya I think the author is just money hungry like a game dev nowadays only making stuff to milk money from it. Tbh I think there should be a 100 chapter minimum before you can lock chapters.
You have a great idea for the story! I like the mixture of time travel, reincarnation, and all the science-fiction aspects of your story.The plot is intriguing and your characters are nicely created.The thing that bothers me is the way you construct dialogues, it shows the imperfection of the author's workshop, so there is a place for improvement.
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Solid writing, grammar and updates so far. Not that many chapters and the story starts kind of slow, but so far it's been a good read. I'm looking forward to the future chapters the plot looks like its going to be interesting.
"Hahaha why should I care every time I go there it's always boring meetings and second uncle constant nagging about me and how I should be more serious Its too stuffy there I would rather start my cultivation instead"
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