🌼🌼🌼I am halfway through the novel and I must say, this book is a gem. the book is so well written, it has the potential to make it big. Five stars because it deserves it. Keep going Author.🌼🌼
This is a really great book with the theme of magic and isekai which I appreciate so very much. I like how the MC makes so many reliable friends and I also like how he has the drive to become stronger by all means possible
A good opening with it's currently 24 chapters, the characters have a clear motivation and the story setup is interesting. There is some room for improvement in the writing such as grammar and sentence structures and in the more descriptive parts. Sometimes we get the explanation after it already happened which makes the story a bit choppy. Overall right now there's alot of room for improvement which at times take away from the story at certain points but also means that this already interesting story can get even better. Looking forward to reading more. Keep it up!
Read the first chapter and I’m already hooked with the rest. So far, there are three main characters in your story, which makes it stand out already amongst others. I love the specific descriptions for each character, such as their heights. I feel like it adds context to how they deal with the things that surround them.
started off a little slow, but picked up pace pretty quickly. it's like a mix of eastern mythology and cultivation more so than other novels. overall pretty good
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