Book Restoration System: Savior Of The Forsaken Legends [BL]

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Its a great start to a novel, the pacing is good and the world is interesting. In some areas,  it could use an editor though, there are some sentences that come off a little weird. But as of chapter 44 its been a fantastic read. Keep it up.

Overall the story is good.The beginning was a bit slow and hard to get through, but as the chapters grew, the momentum and quality started to pickup.We know about the characters and their backgrounds, but we don't know about them personally except what they feel now.The world development has a lot of potential to grow, but it's not there yet. If it's developed too fast the story will go to shit with the current scale, too slow and nothing happens. It's beginning to make more sense, but we currently only know two cities, one village, and the MC's inner space. The world set up could be better because don't really know what races there are, where they're placed, or even a general outline of the continent or world. The quality is good, but it still needs more time to make sense and mature.

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i have not finished reading but the novel seems interesting

"Qiu. Zhi!" She said each word, seethingly. Although her voice barely raised, you can hear the underlying anger in it.

A Dark Circle

Seeing the Phoenix coming towards him he shouted while slicing down and in turn, it was sliced in half. Seeing my Phoenix die so quickly I dashed at him at my full speed and when I got there I slashed horizontally but to my dismay he put out his arms and blocked my sword sending me skidding back