Blue Lock 2

Overall the novel is pretty good and I don’t see any glaring issues other then I started reading it based on first day in game and this novel doesn’t even take place in game so -1 and secondly he has been checking in for days and not a single billion so -1

There isn't even a real plot with the key character gaining his main ability.He just randomly sees it online, that's some **** director level of plot.

This was a nice story.  I really enjoyed the first 100 chapters.  Sadly, the tag says harem and the only ones with harems are background characters by chapter 200.  Tag should probably be comedy.  After chapter 100 the story has much more comedic elements than any other.  By chapter 210 I had to give up.  While it is pretty well written, and the author probably has an idea of where he wants to go with the story, it is just not going anywhere I am interested in seeing.

Novel with a good start. Main character grow in is mentality. I can't wait to read more.Only one thing, I hope the MC will not improve is cultivation too fast and too easily.

Bad grammar and a stupid mc. That's all that needs to be said.

Unsettling. Honestly I thought that everything is just happen inside of our MC's head because I have read too much story with 'The narrator are unreliable aka they are the crazies' but did not expect that even the doctor are one of 'them'. The open ending are nice. I like it. Although I do not think that our MC can survive but who knows. Anyway solid 5* from me. It is a good read.

I really enjoyed reading this, I also think that you should keep writing because I want to know what Henry does to Nathan and what will happen to Caitlyn in the story. You're a great writer with a great imagination 😊

The whole family was abit stunned at her detailed examination of a power structure amongst a group of kids on a online game.