The general world building is pretty good, with a nice story to it. I would really like more of this. BUT there are a lot of errors, especially he/she her/his... and there are some weird story developments...like when Lydia, the mother of the Myra just comes outta nowhere and jumps him
its a really good story but the editing is awful. I got to around chapter 400 before I gave up because the grammar, punctuation, and general flow were so bad. its a shame:(
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Good story, has room for improvement but makes me want to keep reading. Good job and cant wait for more updates! 👍 Good job!Good job!Good job!Good job!Good job!Good job!
"Yak, apa tidak masalah jika aku ikut? Pakaianku seperti ini?" Yoona terus menolak untuk ikut dengannya ke pesta Krystal, si gadis yang berwajah mirip dengan Eunna. Tapi Sehun tidak sekalipun menghiraukan perkataannya dan terus menarik tangannya. "Sebaiknya kau pergi sendiri saja, tidak usah membawaku.." memberatkan langkahnya agar Sehun sulit menariknya. "yak! Kau tidak mendengarku?!" menghentakkan kakinya dengan kuat. Pria itu kontras berhenti melangkah.
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