This novel started out well and had a promising outlook. But there's so many plotlines that were left ignored. Like what the heck happened to his significant other. Literally never heard from again. Worst of all is the last 40 or so chapters, they felt rushed and rather empty (even for this novel). I expected better, only to be disappointed. Granted that happened with most novels, it's rare that the final chapters are worthwhile. Typical Chinese ending in that regard.
I do see the potential of this novel as well as the ideas it presents. However, the writing quality needs some refinement. I understand the overall points of each chapter and the messages of what the characters are trying to present to the reader, however, the early chapters in particular feel like a giant exposition dump. It's not that the information isn't useful, but I think it's way too early to drop them early on. Basically, show and not tell. Some parts that are meant to be told are executed fine, but the rest of the showing elements need to be refined. I know you can do better author, and at the number of chapters you have at the moment, this is a good opportunity for you to refine it and make it better in the future.
No, I’m not a bot. I’m an avid reader and have kept up with all of your original works on wattpad, tbh this was the first story i read made by you and ever since i’ve been hooked on all your other ones. Keep up the good work!
I read it In a app called fizzo. It has contain of over 1000+ chapters. Recently the app is updated and change the language from English into different language and the story is under revision. It's a pity that the author is stop posting any chapters or maybe he can't post anymore because of the new feature of the app. This story was the most exciting novel I ever read. Maybe in the first face of the story it's kinda boring and you may find it look like the other novel story but it is not. I'm read it over 1000+ chapter and it will bring you into different world
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