One would continue reading this story just for its comedic flow. There is no big OP fights or action. The great grandma arrives like a genie which makes you expect she'll be a great master, but sadly she's just a disappointing and annoying bug to the MC.
The only real weak point I can see in this story is the grammar (not that I am an expet). But that can easily be corrected and do not pose any real problem to the comprehension of the story.The world background is unique enough but a bit too vague. It feels like some important informations about it are still hidden, living us "starving" for them. I do not know if this is intentional or not but it add some "addictive" sensation, keeping me hoocked to the world in general.Character wise, I don’t really know how to rate them, because I read so many books, that nothing feel new apart from mentally unstable characters (and I don’t know how to feel about that) but I will give it a plus because the author is working hard to give them feel "human
Well written, it has an interesting system based on biomass, almost like chrysalis but not exactly. I recomend this to anyone who has enjoyed the chysalis novel and wants something new and not the same evolution system as the humdreds on the web.The writing quality was not the most outstanding but still a 4 and a half star, it comes with the newer stories and should get better overtime. The best thing about the text was that it was able to draw me in with its descriptions and describe to me the exact scene.The updating schedual is also something that comes with newer novels, but if this novel picks up traction the author might make the novel a scedual. Please dont drop it.The story development was at times a little dull, like how the was almost no action with the parents of the mc, or the fast developement that skipped some parts of the story. Overall, another 4 and a half.Continued in the commets.
a good book to read and follow. there's the element of reincarnation, strong FL but not over the top skills (or weird powers) currently at chapter 1123, not sure how many chapters there are in this novel, but i like it.. hopefully the story won't drag for too long.
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