Awesome book! I am so glad I had the opportunity to read it!Well laid-out characters in a very well-written setting alongside good dialogues.Love the book! Keep writing, author-san!
Read three chapters and I can't continue. It's just trash. Characters are stereotypical af, sentences make no sense, story is alright, but generic as usual. The MC has a "cute sparrow
Such potential is wasted in this novel, from chapters 35-40 till 400+ the story keeps repeating but with different levels of power. I can see why people would found that appealing on a #weak to strong novel, but here is completely different the mc is already the strangest thing that exists, he just doesn't know that. The author built a pattern for all the characters to treat the mc the same fuc**ing way, except that one bad guy everyone treats the mc like a god.
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This novel is just word diarrhea, the novel barely makes any sense. Really bad translation. It's so bad it starts to get on your nerves, the dialogs don't make sense, the characters cannot be properly identified. I would stay far away from this novel, the story may be good (I haven't read the whole novel) but the writing makes me want to throw my phone at the wall.
Кал,реально,в отличие от многих историй которые мы читаем для того что бы увидить главного героя который перерождаясь мобом,и пытаеться изменить сюжет путем нагибание всех,то здесь я даже разочоровалься с первых глав,характер героя унылый,а дальше прочел,ещё хуже,СЕРЕЗЬНО?!Бросить на произвол судьба главную злодейку,сказав что это ради её блага,но при этом спасать других,конечно конечно,ИСКУПЛЕНИЕ,так обьясняет это нам автор,но это вызвала лишь разочерование,если хотели что бы ГГ немножечка пострадал,то могли на*** стерелизовать и бросить в канаву,нету отличия
The plot was refreshing as the concept is kind of new. Many opportunities to explore. The story does have potential. Character design is also okay.The only downside I found is that there very noticeable grammatical and writing errors. Not the worse I've seen but still a sore thumb. Overall with editing and proofreading this can immensely improved. Consider getting help in editing or try using tools and software on this area.
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