Blood Borne

The mc is evil I don’t know anymore cause author makes it so confusing that the mc is sometimes acts like wimp and sometimes smart, it annoying to read.
Shame it has lot of potential especially the background story.

Grammar: Quite bad. For example the author forgot to n’t at the end of isn’t writing only is.
Story: Not bad.
MC: He saved a girl that was disappearing

Don't mind me just putting some quotes from my favorite game bloodborne:

"Ahh, Kos, or some say Kosm... Do you hear our prayers?"

"No, we shall not abandon the dream."

"No one can catch us! No one can stop us now! [cackling]."

"Ah hah hah ha! Ooh! Majestic! A hunter is a hunter, even in a dream. But, alas, not too fast! The nightmare swirls and churns unending!"

"As you once did for the vacuous Rom, grant us eyes, grant us eyes. Plant eyes on our brains, to cleanse our beastly idiocy."

"The grand lake of mud, hidden now, from sight."

"The cosmos, of course!"

"Let us sit about, and speak feverishly. Chatting into the wee hours of..."

"New ideas, of the higher plane!"

"Now I'm waking up, I'll forget everything..."

Even innapropriate videography that is meant for people who have reached a certain age ( most likely 18+) has better plot, acting, and writing than this buffoonery of a novel.

Amazing thing, the events were fun, the character of mc is still volatile, mc is interesting especially to make humans a meal, but he must continue to drink blood, it is more useful than killing and getting a little strength because of the ring, and in order to hide evidence of it by burning or melting the corpses with some  Solvent potions, good luck

The translation ruins the story, and even if it was written in perfect english the interactions and MCs personality are absolutely horrendous

GOOD You are back!!!
I really liked your previous work Solo player Arvin...
So I anticipate big things from this book too...
Don't disappoint me...