Blood Assimilation

I’ve only just began this book up to ch 37. The world building is very interesting 5/5 and the first chapters are great but the more you read the worst it gets everything seems very forced and the author doent know when to stop the internal monilog and explain the subject form a 3rd person pov. The parents starts off has being very bad parents and neglecting the mc but it seems the author suddenly changes his mind. I do think this story has potential if the author starts fixing his mistakes and stop making everything sounding so forced. Not worth coins but I do think you should read this on a free website.

Hey guys I am not a pro at giving reviews. I mostly like weak to strong stories and this is one of my favourite stories because of the character development and how the first few chapters were really very interesting for me.

Note for Author : Hey Author san, hope you are healthy now and of you ar not please get better soon and be back to your 100%, from one of your fans. I want to read this story and never wanna stop. So I genuinely hope you get better and write many more chaps ❤️ Thank you for your hard work. Your stories do make a difference and help me stop being anxious ❤️ All the best !

Story is well written and is event overall. My biggest complaint would be that the story jumps arounds too much. Thought I think this is the author just being inexperienced. Or maybe there’s a grand plan that just couldn’t be connected fast enough. I dont like how the story painted a terrible situation due to being powerless & then just ingores it like. The kid gets beat up on a regular basis so why doesn’t it warp his character?

The first 10 chapters were good but it goes downhill after that
The pace is too slow
The characters lack substance
The Mc character is unauthentic
Many supporting characters that are irrelevant to the story

This book is pretty awesome, I started reading it and the world development along with the character starting point was incredible! This is a really good storyline and has a ton of potential, however this author is obviously very new, he over explains everything. The progress is infuriatingly slow and it takes forever for anything to happen. I’m sure as the book goes on till get better but for now it’s kinda hard to read.

I love this book! It sounded interesting but once I started reading it I couldn't stop. I caught up in two days and lost a lot of sleep which should tell you how good the book is.