Blessed By The Forgotten One

This novel is now completed. Thank you all for the support and see you soon in my next novel.

Status: 1200+ chapters , completed, epic storylineMC isn't an unfeeling blob nor is he an edgy psycho.Falls into the neutral or chaotic good camp, so sorry if you wanted a villain. However i feel that this story has perfect balance between its many elements. What I like is that the mc makes a genuine connection with the world and people around him and there are plenty of likable side characters. The villains provide a real sense of threat despite the mc being quite OP to be frank. One of my biggest complains with trial read webnovels is that often times the only interesting part of the story is the power system, the world building or some other gimmicky mechanics, and while that is enough to keep my interested in the starting part of the story, once the mc becomes powerful enough i just stop caring, it's not just about lowered stakes its also cause some mc don't really form any meaningful connections or friends or have anything that they genuinely care about, which imo is a very important part of having a soulful and engaging narrative.This story has that good stuff,  it's not too much but its there, which makes it worth it.Do give it a try.

I really like the concept behind this book which is different from other books. The only complaint I had while reading this book was lagging grammer and sentence formation. Many times it was hard for me to understand the meaning behind the sentences.You have also done silly grammatical mistakes like you haven't used full stop (.) in the end of sentences. At some places you have used I instead of he, His instead of her. Please focus on such mistakes.Your book has potential but no reader will stick to your book for longer if he keeps finding such mistakes again and again.

Ok... I read my work after the blackout from the writing and found many shortcoming in the story. So I thought why not review my own work. So far I think the pace of the story is good.. comedy felt good except for some cringy part. Grammar is ****ty with lots of substance missing. Characters are pre established in Canon and no major changes except for ocs. Overall I think it's ok for just casual reading. I think I can except it as passable for my first story.

At chapter 170, the quality of translation takes a nosedive. Worse than machine translation. The entire chapter is a single paragraph, names change constantly within the chapter. Unreadable garbage.

Very good story! Gripping intro and very nice flow of conversation. Rameez is a likeable character that I can kinda relate to. The interactions between characters is my favourite part of the novel.

Hello! shameless person here to tell you I have a book that's just starting out, it has 4 chapters and I need criteria and inspiration, please oh please, tell me my flaws

Absolutely amazing. Specially the way the characters are introduced into the story.Literally every single character with a unique personality is forcing me to give this novel power stones.As long as author-san don't mess his setting, I will continue to read and vote with power stone.