I read your other book and I was so impressed that I traveled to this universe just to see how it compares, so I rate this as a five star as my faith in this book but I will give a proper review once I have read the latest chapter. I am not going to hold anything back because I want my authors to grow.
great story .give it a chance, and you won't be disappointed. witty banter ,mc getting thrown under the bus by female leads . with alot of head slaps lol.
definitely a romance story rather than fantasy. it's well written and if that's your type of genre you'll probably enjoy it. I personally think the harem is just way too big already and we're only at chapter 90 it feels a little like the author has a big and well done emotional arc planned for every new member of the harem but since once that story is told you wouldn't immediately have another big trauma/emotional moment to cover they just introduce another character wether this is ultimately what this story will become or not i can't say at this point. The fantasy elements are too irrelevant to the story for my liking and barely even qualify as a sub plot at perhaps 1/10th of the story content. We barely have any relevant dungeon clearing (2 so far and they were very quick and kind of mid) the exploration of the MC's powers's also gets very little room and tends to happen of screen which is a cardinal sin imo
Definately intriguing premise, storyline is good felt a little annoying at start cause of MC personality but based on his past totally justified and as the story moves on that too is solved the relationships portrayed in book is really good.Good job author.
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Thanks for the book!