Blank Nexus Arcanum: Configuration

The main character is a Mary Sue, he hears of a problem, immediately knows how to fix it, just because, this leads to there being no stakes and a very boring read.I would not recommend it, as it has been written without any conflict. despite having such a good premise, it has been squandered by this author. :(

Very good concept. Cant wait to see the future of this novel. The concept of the main character having spent thousands of in-game years slaughtering the other players would be a good back drop for making him not be phased by killing as well as making him a patient butcher.                                                   W                                                                           W                                                                                 W                                                                           I hope to see where you take this novel and i hope it succeeds

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although it looks like some paragraphs are missing and the story is too fast but it's a good read

I know it’s too early for this but I trust this author with her stories, I love the scar you gave me and I know this one will also be good I mean awesome I think I have found a new favorite author on this platform and I want to read more of her stories and I hope she gets the recognition she deserves

nice                                                                                                                                                         

He was going to recreate the scene, create the same conditions, and well, see what would happen.

"It's ok I'll leave, sorry." He stands up and starts to walk away, but he turns around again. "But can we still be friends?" He looks at me with sad eyes. I walk up to him and hug him.