Excellent history so far. Nothing to criticize but man i need more chapters, i give you my SS i hope you enjoy it.What i can't think is that there's much people reading this novel.saludos desde México
@ chapter 80 It;s pretty common, really. Mc stayed in hell for 400years and now he's prone to anger and beast-like and he's extremely overpowered, for some reason his experience allows him to kill around 300 people without a problemMost of the story goes like this:Someone insults Mc's family or show some killing intent > Massacre > Few dungeons to get the level required for the next battle>> Someone else wants to kill his family >>> Another massacre
Will anyone rip my head off if I said that I don't really like doulu novels.Lalalalalalalalalalalalalalalala- 'just trying to fill in 140 character don't bother with me'
As much as I've read till now it's definitely promising. Starting from the concepts, characters, grammar they all give off an exciting vibe. Well, we only have 3 chapters till now. I'm still waiting for more chapters.Keep it up, Chandu mah boi
The mechanics of the game and the mage class are fun to learn about and are very interesting, The plots seems very slow paced but when you continue to read the next thing you know your on ch 39. Overall the bonds the McCain have with his friends are great, the interactions with the Npc dont feel akward but more realistic. If I could give this a 100 I would.
This story is amazing so far but new chapters come out too slow to keep the interest of some of those who get to the newest chapters and are waiting for new ones to come out. While I understand that is important to take your time writing to make sure that new chapters are of good quality, the fast release of new chapters is also really important even if you have to shorten the chapter to achieve this. More but smaller chapters of the same quality will help you keep the attention of those readers that are less patient or invested in the story because they will notice a notification for a new chapter more often and keep it at the top of their library each time they open it to read the new chapter. It may also help you Increase your writing quality because you will be focusing on a smaller amount of work at a time.
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