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Love this book beyond,I would definitely use some grammar from this book ,I love the ML ,the character design is great ,the story development is great too honestly I think everything about this book is great . that's way I gave it an overall 5.0 mark .great work Author and all the best with this masterpiece I highly recommend this book.
I turned and saw Emiya running towards us but instead of the nice gentle giant we're used to he looks like a cornered beast on its last legs making a final stand. I will never forget what I saw, what will scare me in the future whenever he is in that state, he came and bit off the manticores tail and stabbed/impaled it straight through the Beowulf's skull. After that he went into a flurry of attacks with both legs. What scared me though is....he's smiling, not the usual smile someone on an adrenaline high gives but the one someone so lost in rage they no longer care about themselves or the people around them.
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