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Read this Now! First 2 chapter blew me away with quality and originality. The character I love him, and system even better. Obivously read only if your older but lets be honest... your going to read. Just becauae i saud only if your older. But start pumping those power stones into the author's blood stream!
MY EXISTENCE IS EXP!MY BLOOD IS EXP!MY FLESH IS EXP!MY EVERY INCH OF SKIN AND CELLS IS EXP!I EMBODY EXP AND EXP EMBODY ME!I CREATED THOUSANDS OF THOUSANDS OF USELESS REVIEWS FOR THE SAKE OF EXP AND EXP IS MY ONE AND ONLY DESIRE!EXP IS MY LIFE!MY GOAL!MY EVERYTHING!AND I SHALL DO EVERYTHING IN MY DESIRE TO GET MY EXP!
It has a good system, I'll give it that. Incredibly disappointed in the characters and writing quality.At chapter 1, immediately saw tons of grammatical errors that made it a grind to read it as far as I did. I was hoping there would be some improvement, and have faith the main character was smarter than he appeared to be, but alas that doesn't happen.The Main character lacks any intelligence. The systems personality is annoying.I was hoping to find some enjoyment here, but it's just not worth my time.Author, hire an editor.For all those who wish to read this, you will be mentally correcting grammatical errors the whole time.
This is the first review that I warier on this app. I have to say I am very impressed. The quality of the story is better good. It is light and funny but very addictive. I feel I am already getting withdrawal symptoms as I just finish all the chapters. Keep doing good job with this fresh new take on cultivation and dungeons.
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