The story is like every other xanxia. Same underestimated mc, weak to strong, etc. The writing is terrible. Need editing. For example, it take 10 paragraphs to describe something that could be done in 1 or 2. Very wordy, repetitive, bad grammar, run on sentences, typos and wrong choice of words (vocabulary).I had to drop this after a dozen chapters.
I will put 5 stars to enourage the author, i like this GENRE SO FUCKING MUCH, after IRAS died i really wanted a novel wit this theme, but its always dropped.
Nice work my former classmate, keep it up to reach your goals, inspire others and always enjoy making novel like this 😁. I hope that you understad what I said 😂. I fully recommend to read this novel ❤, and I hope that this novel will be number 1 soon! Godbless😇
A must read!!! The POV switching may get awhile to be used too but its definitely worth it!!I especially enjoy seeing Quinn’s POV more as I find the military and the characters at that side more interesting... And Its exciting to learn more about the war and those eccentric hollows!!The fight scenes are also very well written as well!!Keep it up author!!
En la oscuridad de una habitación, la luz tenue de una lámpara de escritorio salpicaba de misticismo alrededor. En una esquina de la habitación la oscura figura de un ente al parecer humano permanecía sentado, el silencio era total, de repente, pantallas frente a el se encienden, doce para ser precisos y los rostros ocultos solo daban la impresion de ser el mismo hasta que las voces se hicieron escuchar.
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