writing quality isn't the worst but far bellow the standards of what the rating of the book would suggest, basically reviews seem lil fake 😅 honestly just barely better than some mtl novels that webnovel puts out.story development is very weird at times, there is no pace to it, stuff just happens without a good reason, basically a lot of forced plots just because you as the author can do it i guess. I guess it's due to being an inexperienced author and it's hard to make that plot development seem more natural you, idk... probably know about this problem yourself.characters are honestly bad... like they aren't even budget author pov's copies, copies so bad that it's insulting to the originals. Ye I said it, might seem harsh but that's the reality of things, you have 30+ reviews telling you how good the book is, but it's not.... not even close. the idea it self is good but execution is way offI could go in deeper but I won't lol, maybe will check this book out again in the far future and write another review 🥱
If your wondering why the review only has two of the sections filled out that are not in the middle its because I didn’t read the story. The reason you ask. Well the first chapter of the actual story is locked and I like many others am not going to waste my coins and fast passes on a story I can’t preview. My advice would be to open some free chapters and let people get a feel for it before you start charging them.
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I won't lie to you. I freaking love this. it's amazing. the growth, the anticipation, the characters. simple great. I can't wait for trinity and our mc to end up together. my favorite character is zephyr honestly. the assassin gig fits him perfectly. I hope he gets to shine more and becomes stronger honestly can't wait. I hope him and Gwen get some romance I won't lie I ship the two. honestlyand brixghton and nixie. I swear I hope these are the ships for the future
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